How grammatically stupid I am

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I also agree Rob. This sounds more natural. The original sentence was obviously well crafted,it just doesnt flow as well as your explanation sentence.
It reminds me of the times my Baseball Coach in High School would come to the mound to settle me down, telling me to stop trying too hard and just throw to the mitt.
Just thinking, for some reason I have become engrossed. "While meticulously reviewing her papers, I quickly realized the information contained within justifies further study."
I do sincerely like your wording from your explanation to Eva the best.
Whichever you decide Rob, I'm sure it will sound great when reading the entire paragraph. I wish you the best, good luck with your book.