The prologue

[Laurie Verge]

Rob,

I finally had a chance to read the Prologue, and it is very good and very moving. I can find nothing wrong with your style, and I would never change context on anyone unless it is clearly confusing and erroneous.

Since I am teased about being the Queen of Commas, however, I did find a few places where ones are needed. However, my computer refuses to save the Acrobat file to anything except read only. Is it possible to send those pages to me in Word 97-2003 as an e-mail attachment to laurie.verge@pgparks.com? Otherwise, I can print the pages out and red-ink them and then send to you via USPS if you supply your address.