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RE: Friends of Rich Hill Website
Dave - I'm glad you found my thoughts helpful and find the changes you made perfect.
While the first "headliner" was sure a good photo from the artistic point of view (and I liked the daffodils, too) - for the headline purpose I find the one you selected now much better. To me it does looks much more inviting (I can see families planning a visit) - actually very inviting. It shows the entire house and is really different from the second one. I think it's good the photo does show the house in still improvable condition and not perfect - I would rather feel motivated to donate for something where I can see the need.
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