Exciting New Children's Book On The Way

[Eva Elisabeth]

I second your wife (didn't know the old one wasn't yours), and despite this I love the new drawing, I think it's more attractive to kids. I think one needs to see the sepia version to compare. IMO the blue, yellow and purple in the "audience" are too distracting and confusing to the eyes. My exprience is that kids and students love little tasks, personally I would place them after each chapter. Also I think a task to mark places/events in a map would be quite effective.